WHAT'S YOUR TAKE ON HOW IT WORKS?

[Julian]

You may have seen a novel on the web like LZ. I haven't. I'd like your responses about the look and feel, the experience of reading it. Do the Sidetrips distract you? Do you have suggestions for images or links? Is it difficult to navigate? How does the way it's presented add or subtract from the story? Basically, I want your opinions about how it comes across the screen.

[Paul]

This is an incredible document, both the ur-text and the evolving sur-text, a huge contribution to the new paradigm in literary publishing.

[eohip]

Paul is right. There's nothing like it. It's brilliant. It's art. It usurps the media -- reveals the media --transcends the media -- gives the world a map to your heart and mind.